Color is great. Even though selective color is a bit cliched now, you have used it to advantage here. I like the angled bars also. Something about the pose though feels awkward. I think it is her left arm which now appears not to be supported because of the angle. Did you get any with the model making eye contact with the lens? That can give a more intimate feel.
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