This otherwise ordinary composition seems to be a study in perspective and lines. Honestly, it is too subtle for a novice like me. I need something more stark or obvious. But, if I may, the one thing I do notice is that the beige building on the right, just beyond the yellow one is too light in contrast to the sky. Because of this it sort of looks a little soft at the height. This is my honest observation. I don't know how you could have addressed this by technique or adjustment. It is a nice effort.