The subject is overpowered by the background. The eye has difficulty in focusing on Miss Beth. The composition is fine but I don't know what to suggest about the colours.
I feel this is a good effort but others are more qualified to give useful guidance.
Speaking only for me I like the capture chiefly because the background reflects the color and intensity of the model. Very much like the colors. The gritty ground tells a story of the place and model. I like your comp. I like your choices. Wish I could see more of your work. Like it if you would post more. You have style. Welcome to the blog.
thanks for your comments, they are much appreciated. I am trying to upload more photos but not having much success! Im getting the message that they are uploaded but cant see them... will try again
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