Frankly, I guess I am too literal, but I fail to understand the relationship between the capture and its title/narration. It is a reach. As an abstract it works on a different level, doesn't it? Important to remember that on the Blog the members only have your capture, its title, and any narration you care to provide. If they don't fit together then it is simply confusion. No artist wants his viewer confused.
Calling it Pine Needles is better. But, greg52 in the future don't change your post just to suit someone else's comment or criticism. Stand strong by your conviction as an artist-photographer. I was simply stating my viewpoint. You are the artist. To post means you believe in yourself and your perspective. Again, welcome to the Blog and I hope this experience was fruitful for you. You are the artist. I am simply a failed novice.