Nope! I don't like this version as much. Yes, I see how you spot lighted the face. But, the shadowing of the skin on the edges of the face tend to blend with that bland, gray background, and her fine hair color is lost in the darkened area off the face. Your experts who advised you may think better. But, I think your photo Sophie #1 is much better. Photoshop has its place. But, not here.