OK effort, however, the colours haven't been removed from between the bars and it looks like some colour has been erased from the core subject. A bit more time and attention to detail then this would work better. A tip for next time, change your location for a more sideways on or front facing shot.
Thanx for taking the time to make a comment, the colour wasn't erased from the subject, the horses back and front were like that anyhow in the full colour version. Thanx for the tip, but ive already done that and it was too ordinary.