I'm intrigued by your experimentation with vanishing points, which this one certainly is. I generally like this photo, though I can't tell what it is on the left, other than the light. Focus is a problem for me when looking down the pier. Edges could be sharper. The one thing that really bothers me is the post sticking up in the front. It's an impediment to the eye that wants to travel straight though those lights and shadows to the end. Night shots are difficult and I think you have a good eye. The high key contrast is very good. Do you use a tripod for these shots?