Yea, a bit bright. I think it could be darkened up ko in photoshop.
Only problem, highlights might be a bit burnt out though.
The othe rone is better but I think it needs darkening using levels a bit and B&C
A nice shot though, really interesting subject.
Other one much better,just about gets away with the burnt out highlights I think.Like the cityscape you've captured.'There is no point pressing the shutter unless you are making some caustic comment on the incongruities of life. That is what photography is all about. It is the only reason for doing it.'......Philip Jones Griffiths