I like it too.'There is no point pressing the shutter unless you are making some caustic comment on the incongruities of life. That is what photography is all about. It is the only reason for doing it.'......Philip Jones Griffiths
I like the idea, but the one girl in focus looks a bit artificial, like she has been cut and pasted into the image. Possibly needs a bit more of the area around her in focus (i.e. at the same distance from the camera) to simulate real depth of field.