Can I be radical? Try cropping the bottom paving slab out! I think it needs the area at the top as it helps to tell the story and gives some perspective of where the original shot has come from. Great image.
Hmm.. no finger on the trigger ,is this something to do with health and safety? Well captured image, she's quite convincing isn't she?'There is no point pressing the shutter unless you are making some caustic comment on the incongruities of life. That is what photography is all about. It is the only reason for doing it.'......Philip Jones Griffiths