I didn't see an earlier version, so I think the top looks fine. I enjoy seeing the simplicity of design here, with the elements of the image taking the striking angular posture. While I have backed off commenting on framing (for the most part), I must say that if you are after simplicity, your frame here adds a layer of complexity.--Chris
Nice Bullrushes!,,A well executed shot!,,,what talent this lady has!,,and to put matters straight,Moses was found in a Moses Basket!,,and the talk is it came from Mothercare!...Ken
If I see something I "SHOOT!"