Lemon squash

stewart

I really like the top half of this picture, but I'm not keen on the empty space at the bottom and I'm not sure about the lemon either. If I were rating the top half on its own, it would be a ten. Smile

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#1 Tue October 31, 2006 5:03pm

kenp

Stewart is spot on!,,it actually looks better if you crop off at the top of the blue and leave half a lemon!,,,very nearly brilliant!.........Ken

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#2 Tue October 31, 2006 9:30pm

fdinaro

I agree with stewart I would crop 1/2 of the lemon (use top half) This will impove the comp and make the photo come alive Smile

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#3 Tue October 31, 2006 9:32pm

Jogi

Thanks all for comments and suggestions.

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#4 Wed November 1, 2006 5:14am

desertpea

Love the colours, but have to agree with stewart and fd - let's see the next version! - Jan

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#5 Thu November 2, 2006 5:58am

Badger

The overbright highlight on the lemon spoils what is otherwise a pleasing image.

#6 Thu November 2, 2006 8:01am