Composition and structure of the overall shot is good!...using F4 has limited the amount of shot in focus,f16 or even f22 would have pulled the whole shot together bringing more into play , 8/10 for a fine effort...I like it!...Ken
If I see something I "SHOOT!"
Well composed shot...like it.'There is no point pressing the shutter unless you are making some caustic comment on the incongruities of life. That is what photography is all about. It is the only reason for doing it.'......Philip Jones Griffiths
Thanks for comments - Ken I agree that f16 say would have a better choice for DOF but I think I got carried away with the foreground too much - thanks again for constructive comment....Gerry (fellow Northumbrian)