i can see what was trying to be achieved but a few improvments could be the crop either have the women in or not (only half of her) and im not sure about the validity of the red areas they seem to have spresd to the girls arm and leg but amongst all of my opinions i like the idea
you definitely have a beautiful photograph in the little girl... I would agree with above on the rest... should make it just her and maybe drop the red... think you have a superb photo waiting to come out"The poetry of photography will always be more important than the mechanics of the camera..." - J-H. Lartigue
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