Vladimir, this is just almost a perfect photo! The only thing I can see that would be better is a crop to take out the bust at top. It's cut through by the frame, which to me is almost always disturbing. And it doesn't seem to increase the understanding of the woman for me. Excellent placement of her hair against the dark rectangle, by the way.
Thank you very much, Chris! ))) I left the bust because it is involved into the idea. The dark rectangle directs the woman's vertical hair-dress upwards to the man's beard (which grows downward! ))) It is obvious for me only I am afraid So, the link 'hair-dress - beard' is just what I was going to show. It seems to be better if I would include the bust completely but, unfortunately, it was cut - street reportage! Anyway, thank you very much, Chris! Vlad
#2 Mon June 16, 2008 3:46pm
I see it now. Perhaps it would make more sense to me by cropping some off the left and making it a vertical shot.