I cant figure out what your focal point is, your subject. From the title I think maybe sunrise or new day, maybe Spring, but for me that does not come across if that was your intent. Its all subjective. Everyone has their own taste, likes and dislikes. Its what you like that matters, its your work.
~In His Love~ Maggi D For I am not ashamed of the gospel of Christ: for it is the power of God unto salvation to every one that believeth; to the Jew first, and also to the Greek. Romans 1:16
i dont no either, for me the boats stand out the most, but yea ur right, i like it so its all gd
#3 Wed January 28, 2009 2:06pm
Hannah, first of all, I'd like to propose that you go ahead and spell out full words rather than use texting abbreviations. For somebody like me who doesn't text, it's a bit of a struggle getting through.
As to the photo, I don't mind the brightness at top so much. Perhaps a crop to get closer to the trees would lessen the effect, and maybe it would help if you straightened out the tilt a bit. As Maggi says, photography is way subjective, and you're perfectly allowed to have your own vision with it. Personally, I really like the high contrast boats.
The best of luck with your continued vision.
#4 Wed January 28, 2009 3:01pm
Oh, by the way, I forgot to say welcome to the blog, and to advise that it helps everybody to have fewer posts at once. Please, though, don't stop letting us see your work, because that's why we're all here. Say three or four a day max, sometimes more if you have linked subjects (before processing and after, that sort of thing).
thank you chris, sorry about the abbreviations, it comes naturally for a 16 year old!
and thankyou, but i cannot really edit it much, i dont have photoshop or any editing programmes like that :S
but i will try my best to invest in some