I don't like how the top of her head is cut off and the focus seems to lie on her mid section.Her hair also almost looks like the same color as her skin. it washes it out. I think if there was some sort variation in colors...maybe like have natural red hair...or a brunette...something to contrast her skin tone. She is very pretty, I just dont think this photo does her justice.
[font=Arial][size=4]Diving into this industry head first!